The Official Writing Challenge
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10/11/07
This is tastefully deep and powerful. It moved me.
Nice progression and build up toward the end... by the time I finished reading, my heart was worshipping too. Well done!
10/13/07
Very powerful - you have some wonderful descriptions. Very worshipful :) Keep writing.
10/15/07
I LOVE your OT examples of worship. Then with your center paragraph I was puzzled just for a second, then realized, yes, it's perfect. Jesus' death is at the center of our worship. Brilliant. Your ending is very powerful. Thanks!