The Official Writing Challenge
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10/11/07
You really surprised me! Great twist!
The feelings you portrayed about old friends and new friends, and the "right" of one group and the "wrong" of the other let me know that I'm not the only double minded soul struggling to be one with God. Thank you.
10/12/07
Very creative approach. I love the voice of this. I'm fairly certain that if I hadn't known the topic you would have fooled me until the end. Good stuff!
10/14/07
I like the truth to this piece. Worship is definitely addictive. Good job.
10/18/07
Congratulations on your highly commended. This is a very creative take on the topic. Good job.
Congratulations on placing 4th! You deserve it.

This part really made me stop and think: "my own troubles donít seem as ominous and overwhelming when I pray about the problems and concerns of others." That's an important observation, and it has compelled me to try more praying for others to see what happens. ;-)