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Previous Challenge Entry (Level 2 – Intermediate)
Topic: New Year (05/09/05)

TITLE: New Wine "Year"
By Bill Whitworth
05/11/05


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New Oil and New Wine, This day begins the new year mind. Romance the Spirit dance this day and find your place today. Today begins my new year yesterday is done, tommorrows not made it here yet so today we see the Son. The new year comes each day it Spirit Breathed to me. I am the flower born of morn in year year life and New Year form, like seed that yesterday was planted and with the rising sun, I with non day light am risen until the day is done, silently then I lay me down, and wait my 1000 years for to jesus and day is as a thousand years a thousand years a day, so then this year has past almost but a new ones bound to be. I will then rise in My Fathers Love a new year for to see !


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Leticia Caroccio05/17/05
I liked your last line the best. It drove your message home.
Sally Hanan05/17/05
Good wording and imagery. Would be much easier to read if it was written in line form rather than sentence form.
Phyllis Inniss 05/19/05
I thought this piece had a poetic ring to it and could possibly have made greater impact as a poem. Don't be shy; try writing in poetry form and see what will emerge.