The Official Writing Challenge
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09/22/07
Good points. We do always need to remember to change our reactions to pray first instead of panicking or worrying first.
09/23/07
A lovely devotional. I especially liked these lines:

Follow His example and look to heaven first. Pray expecting an answer.

Good reminder for all of us.
How true. A good devotional and well done.
09/25/07
I like the point you were trying to make. After you first quoted scripture correctly, you then misquoted it by saying he told the disciples to sit down. He did not disperse the food the disciples did. We can give it to Him (our cares), but he still requires action on our part. When writing a devotional the scripture cannot be manipulated to make our point. The reader has to know if they were to look this up it would read just as you told it. Keep writing, good skills.
Very good advice here.
09/28/07
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