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09/20/07
This piece personifies the topic word. It relaxed me just by reading. Great descriptions!
09/21/07
Nice adjectives and a cool story.
The descriptions are so vivid your reader can visualize the calm and beauty of Fall. Excellent job!
09/23/07
You use beautiful imagery in this piece. It is full peaceful phrases and pictures. Very well written.
I have lived in rural towns before so I can really relate to your story. I became calm just reading it. We have deer around here also and you described them perfectly. Good writing!
Very descriptive, and you covered some of my favorites...fall, farms, harvest, and critters of every kind. Nice job.
I like your setting of serenity. Sounds peaceful.
So well written! I hope this places, it's just beautifully worded with rich descriptions. Nice, nice job!
Fall has always been my favorite season. You did a beautiful job bringing me into your setting - I feel mesmerized.