The Official Writing Challenge
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09/22/07
Nice poem. I especially liked these lines:

Child, withdraw from all your turmoil
It’s for Me to give you rest.
Try walking with Me in silence
And see that I offer what’s best.
Let My tender love enfold you
Remember My words that you’ve read;
Yes, truly I am in control
Now, calmly ponder all I’ve said.
Laury
09/23/07
This is really nice. Your words speak to so many people. The voice and cadence of this poem are very calming. Nice job.
09/24/07
My fave line is :

Come away with Me beloved
To a place of innermost peace
There we can enjoy a visit

Just evoked an image of God and me sitting on a veranda somewhere just "being".

Thanks..that was great...

Leanna
09/24/07
What a lovely, lyrical, message from God. Nice!
Nice invitation to peace and tranquility.
09/25/07
Just lovely, and wonderfully calming. Enjoyed this very much.
This is just beautiful. I love the flow of God's voice speaking to our heart.