The Official Writing Challenge
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09/21/07
I shared in Kiara's tranquility. You've painted vivid pictures, and the words you chose matched the setting. Speaking to God amongst such beauty must have been transforming ... and she knew where to go. Excellent.
09/21/07
Good work.
Beautiful writing. You can feel the beauty and calm throughout the piece. Excellent.
09/23/07
You really do paint a beautiful, peaceful picture with your words. This is really good.
Sounds like a beautiful, calming moment in time.
09/25/07
Just the descriptive tone is enough to make this a good piece. Good work.
09/28/07
Congratulations, Christine. Your entry has placed 12th in Level 2. The Lists for the Top 15 in each Level and the Top 40 overall are available in the Weekly Results and Highest Rankings forum of our Faithwriters Message Boards.