The Official Writing Challenge
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09/21/07
Well written... the best of blessings on you.
Love the retelling of this wonderful story. You brought it to life with your descriptive writing.
09/25/07
Good descriptive telling of this story. A little stiff when the actual wording of the scriptures are used (I agree with the first commenter) but other than that, really good.