The Official Writing Challenge
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09/16/07
I don't often read stories from Miriam's POV, so this was a fun change of pace.

When re-telling Bible stories--especially ones as familiar as this one--it's a good idea to add new details, to make it fresh and exciting for your readers. That'll crank it up a notch for your already excellent writing.