The Official Writing Challenge
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09/16/07
I can just picture her! What a delightful child!

This was fun to read, perhaps not the strongest on the topic of "surprised," but still a great story. I like your use of present tense. Well done.
09/19/07
I enjoyed this entry. It was fun learning how this child grew and changed through the experiences of her Grandmother with her. That's a unique perspective!