The Official Writing Challenge
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09/16/07
One of the best Bible stories for this topic.

It's a good idea to avoid exclamation marks, and to choose strong verbs and nouns instead. I'd love to see this taken to the next level--with more details imagined from his life--what he's seeing, doing, touching...

It's a great illustration for irony, isn't it?
09/19/07
Who could have been more surprised than this guy? Good writing and retelling of this story.