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09/13/07
This is way funny. I would love to know whether this really happened. Great Ending.
09/13/07
I knew from t he title that this was going to be humorous, and it was - well done. Loved it. As I teach ESL mainly to hispanics, I know that often times misunderstandings arise...this could have been one of them. Several scenerios ran through my head as I read this. Good job. Goes in the puppy pen.
I enjoyed this very much. Only one suggestion--I would omit the first paragraph and get right into the story. Or, put the first paragraph at the end. It's a great story, well done!
09/16/07
Oh, how wonderful and hilarious!

I agree--the first paragraph almost gives away the secret, and you don't want to do that! This was just priceless.
09/18/07
Very funny! My sister and I delivered Thanksgiving baskets one year, and while we had some mild surprises, thank goodness we didn't experience anything as funny or surprising as this!