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Previous Challenge Entry (Level 2 – Intermediate)
Topic: Mothers (05/02/05)

TITLE: A Reflection of God
By Crista Darr
05/08/05


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Tossing, turning soul within the dark womb
Comfortable prisoner conceived in sin
Yet the lover of his soul – travailing, suffering
Lays down her life for his deliverance
Out of the darkness and into the light

And as the apostle rested his head
Upon the prophetic bosom of the Lord
The delicate child grasps her nurturing breast
With the feast of sincere milk he thrives
Cradled in the hearth of satisfaction

Tenderly bowing down over this child
Over this helpless one – dependent on mercy
And contented by the security of unconditional love
She is endued with the desire to fulfill his every need
And softly bound by the patience of commitment

Baby steps on the pathway – faltering, stumbling
The fallen child looking hopefully upward
Is gently lifted by the righteous hand that binds his wounds
And drying tears from his saddened eyes, she comforts
Setting his feet on the firmer ground

From his confident walking emerges the run
Down a wayward road traveled only for self
Through the barrenness of a doubting world
Void of all peace and tranquil songs
Yet her interceding prayers usher the care of angels

In his running, he denies – with fruitless wanderings
But echoes of her voice follow relentless in his mind
Whispers of remembrance – of truth instilled since birth
His hungry soul with deep regret groans against the wind
Longing for rebirth


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Cheri Hardaway 05/12/05
Wow! As a parent, our love is truly a reflection of God's love. The beautiful nurture of a mother towards her child is touchingly described in this poem. I can feel the yearning of the mother to have her child find his rest in his Savior! I love the progression from the womb through the different stages of childhood. Very powerful. Thanks for sharing! Blessings, Cheri
Debbie OConnor05/12/05
In my eyes, this is a masterpiece. God certainly shows His love through a devoted mother as she tenderly, repeatedly lays down her life for the child. And the conclusion, with the echoes of truth instilled since birth drawing the child back to the Father...awesome! I hope this wins. It is well worthy.
Suzanne Shepard05/12/05
This is absolutely beautiful! I'm not much of a poetry buff, but this one takes my breath away! Love it!
Maxx .05/19/05
Very nice piece! You have en excellent way with words! I'll send you a full critique via private message. :-)
Mitzi Busby05/29/05
"Dependent upon mercy," very true. We are all dependent upon it. Your love as a parent shines through. Your love of the Father is also shining.


   
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