The Official Writing Challenge
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A good reminder on how we shound treat others, for they all are someones father or mother. God Bless.
05/10/05
A loving commentary on what many experience as a heartbreaking experience. Beautiful.
05/13/05
This is so heartfelt and precious! I had to hold back my tears during the last stanza.
05/14/05
Absolutely brilliant! I loved this poem. It says it all. Expertly written - touched my heart in so many ways.
Wonderful!
Blessings, Lynda
05/14/05
Excellent! Keep writing stuff like this, it has a profound message.