The Official Writing Challenge
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09/14/07
I really like this. It is always good to be reminded of the urgency of our message. Thanks for writing this.
Debbie
Excellent job! A reminder of how wrong the words, "It's never too late" are. Eventually it will be too late.
09/16/07
Good cautionary tale, reminds me of that old song "I Wish We'd All Been Ready."

Some typos and misspelled words, an apostrophe fault or two--this story is worth a second edit, and distribution to a large audience.