The Official Writing Challenge
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I enjoyed this- caught one little boo-boo but all in all it was very nice. good job!!
09/11/07
An enjoyable retelling of this familiar scripture story! The POV is unique and the dialogue held my attention. You came up with a good example of BOLD. :)
09/12/07
Great writing. Good story telling ability. Be blessed!