The Official Writing Challenge
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09/08/07
This poem asks some important questions!

Consider re-visiting this one again to tweak the meter a bit, and to correct a few errors in punctuation and word choice.

Thanks for sharing this piece with us!
09/09/07
A couple of things, one I think the first line came from a Robert Frost poem, second I did not find the theme "bold" in the poem. The sentiment was fine but the flow was definitely off and not much punch. On an encouraging note it did ask the question that many take the answer for granted. Keep writing.
Charming poem on important questions indeed! Yes, a little work on meter will get the rhythm smoother and even more enjoyable for your readers. Thank you for this poem.