The Official Writing Challenge
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09/08/07
Really interesting writing style! I like the short, choppy paragraphs...in a longer work, they'd be wearisome after a while, but here, they're just perfect. And your word choices, your ending...love it. Really strong entry.
09/11/07
Really interesting read! I like your style of writing in this article. You have a knack for drawing vivid word pictures.
I like this. The style brought me in and kept me there.
You might consider capitalizing references to Jesus.
Good peice. Well written. Loved the ending.