The Official Writing Challenge
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Talk about on topic - there was the idea of fear in every line until the end, where you gave a great message. There's so much to fear these days, and you hit on a LOT of it. How can we not 'stay tuned' to the Lord?

Great poem, it read like a song for me. :-)
09/05/07
Quite delightful - our culture certainly fears just about everything and you've hit on so many of them here.
Note - 'Your Choice' and not 'You're Choice' also 'interest rates rise'
Oh, yes, you certainly did target the topic! Every line pulled your reader right along to the next too. A little polishing on rhythm and it will be a super poem! I enjoyed this one. Keep writing and being a blessing!
09/06/07
Nothing to be embarrassed about in this one. A strong message well spoken.
There are now no rules in poetry - so I've been told - so maybe the variation in rhythm is no problem. Nonetheless, many might say that consistency of style is important. The debate goes on.
09/06/07
I enjoyed this poem. You handled it exceeding well, showing the many reasons for fear, not only in your country but worldwide. The message at the end points to our Hope.
09/06/07
Very nice. Other than the typo in the title (which I am sure you know by now)an excellent commentary in prose form, keep up the good work.