The Official Writing Challenge
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When we are fearful and ask for help, only then will God come to our side. Great poem. chris x
08/31/07
Great poem. Made me think of an interpretation of Psalms.

Good job.
09/03/07
I really enjoyed your poem. Your use of adjectives to check a mental picture is wonderful. Keep up the good work!!
09/03/07
Wow! This is incredible--an exceedingly fine poem.
09/03/07
Amen! Someone hand me a kleenex. Powerful poem. The rhythm is perfect and the message is so comforting. Wonderful words and message. Definately my favorite of all.
09/06/07
Well done. Have you thought about using this for song lyrics?
09/06/07
Lots of good stuff in this poem. I agree with the another commenter could be used for song lyrics with a little trimming.
09/07/07
Congratulations on your high commended. I'm not usually a fan of poetry -- but this is really good. I enjoyed reading this very much.