The Official Writing Challenge
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I loved the tone that you set with Elvis and a pot of coffee and your mom's bible. I almost dozed off with you. Your attention to detail was also very good. Thanks for sharing it. Nicely done.
05/10/05
I loved it!

How true that certain songs and smells can make another seem close.
05/13/05
Great story intro. It would help to see some of this in paragraphs/blocks of story rather than seperated lines.
05/14/05
I really enjoyed reading this. It was like watching through the window to see it all happen.
05/16/05
Pam, the title of this one made me smile every time I saw it in the list during the week of judging. Now I want to take a moment to encourage you and let you know that although you didn't actually receive an award, your entry did make it into the semi-finals on what was a highly competitive week. So well done. Give yourself a pat on the back and keep rising to the challenge! Love, Deb (Challenge Coordinator)