The Official Writing Challenge
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I wanted to see more! You really got me... You could so develop this into a longer story. Well done.

Oh! This is the beginning of a wonderful story. I wish it could go on! I like the subtle way you brought out the relationship between the doctor and the patient.
08/24/07
I was absolutely glued to this story. Very well done, shades of Alton Gansky's "Dark Moon." Would love to read on...
Put this one in the puppy pen.
08/25/07
A good story seems to be just starting from this beginning. I'd like to read more about this couple some day!
08/26/07
Tenderly written.
Great suspense and tragic. I feel there is more to this story and it is so well written that I hope in the months to come, the MC will be able to forgive herself, regain her memory and move on with her life!
08/30/07
Very creative. Congratulations on your EC!
This is AWESOME! I love the mystery. I am so glad the doctor was her husband. WELL DESERVED win and EC placing. Congrats!
08/30/07
Great writing! Congratulations on your EC!
08/30/07
Beautifully Written, and Congragulations on your well deserved EC win.
This was such a deserved win.
I enjoyed reading this and would have liked to read on further...
Congratulation. chris x
You had me thru every word.
I couldn't stop reading. Very well written
08/30/07
You have an awesome entry. Very well done. Congrats!!
08/30/07
Congratulations on your EC -- very much deserved. This is really good. Very gripping and suspenseful.
08/30/07
CONGRATULATIONS, Laurie, on your 1st PLACE in Intermediate and your 2nd PLACE EC WIN!!!!!!! WOW!! Now you can come sit up in Advanced with me!

This is a well-written, very creative story! Great job! :)
08/30/07
Laurie,

Congratulations on your well-deserved blue ribbon. What a story! Great job! Glad to have you in Advanced!

Cathy
09/03/07
Laurie, This is wonderful writing. The suspense is like glue. Will you please "finish" "this book". You certainly deserve #1 with this one. Gene Hudgens
09/05/07
Fluid & dramatically paced...very engaging!