The Official Writing Challenge
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I wanted to see more! You really got me... You could so develop this into a longer story. Well done.

Oh! This is the beginning of a wonderful story. I wish it could go on! I like the subtle way you brought out the relationship between the doctor and the patient.
I was absolutely glued to this story. Very well done, shades of Alton Gansky's "Dark Moon." Would love to read on...
Put this one in the puppy pen.
A good story seems to be just starting from this beginning. I'd like to read more about this couple some day!
Tenderly written.
Great suspense and tragic. I feel there is more to this story and it is so well written that I hope in the months to come, the MC will be able to forgive herself, regain her memory and move on with her life!
Very creative. Congratulations on your EC!
This is AWESOME! I love the mystery. I am so glad the doctor was her husband. WELL DESERVED win and EC placing. Congrats!
Great writing! Congratulations on your EC!
Beautifully Written, and Congragulations on your well deserved EC win.
This was such a deserved win.
I enjoyed reading this and would have liked to read on further...
Congratulation. chris x
You had me thru every word.
I couldn't stop reading. Very well written
You have an awesome entry. Very well done. Congrats!!
Congratulations on your EC -- very much deserved. This is really good. Very gripping and suspenseful.
CONGRATULATIONS, Laurie, on your 1st PLACE in Intermediate and your 2nd PLACE EC WIN!!!!!!! WOW!! Now you can come sit up in Advanced with me!

This is a well-written, very creative story! Great job! :)

Congratulations on your well-deserved blue ribbon. What a story! Great job! Glad to have you in Advanced!

Laurie, This is wonderful writing. The suspense is like glue. Will you please "finish" "this book". You certainly deserve #1 with this one. Gene Hudgens
Fluid & dramatically paced...very engaging!