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Good story. I really felt for this poor girl, but it was great how you showed that her anger was toward the situation and that bell, not towards him. The ending was great. Amazing how big a difference those particular 2 words can make. Thank you for writing this.
This is a beautiful story, Clarissa! I love your characters and the reason for the MC's anger. The ending is lovely, too. Glad I found you!
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