The Official Writing Challenge
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08/12/07
You sound angry. Even the way the article is written is in an angry fashion. Try putting two spaces after the periods and space between paragrahs for an easier read. Good thoughts, keep writing.
08/21/07
You make some good points. You were well able to express your viewpoint in your article in a clear way. Check out how some of the other articles are spaced, and your articles will be easier to read in the next Challenge! Keep writing for the Challeges!