The Official Writing Challenge
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08/09/07
I always love delightful little romances.
This is so true how some teens view themselves. I was pleased there was a happy ending for Lisa.
08/15/07
Very cute. I'm sure many have been in Lisa's shoes!

Some spots could be ironed out with a little less "telling," and a bit of smoothing on the dialogue could make a big difference.

Great job...I'm glad for the happy ending. :)
08/21/07
This is a heart warming story. I'm glad the ending turned out so nice for the young teen. It's such an awkward time for many kids this age.