The Official Writing Challenge
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08/13/07
This is a real good job! I liked the way and order you presented the story. The story was clear, the message was good and well worth the read. Thank you.
08/17/07
Congratulations, Teresa. Your entry has placed 12th in Level 2. The Lists for the Top 15 in each Level and the Top 40 overall are available in the Weekly Results and Highest Rankings forum of our Faithwriters Message Boards.
08/21/07
You hit on an interesting idea for this topic: our hidden feelings about God! Of course, He already knows how we feel, but we still try to pretend. This is a good story.