The Official Writing Challenge
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08/10/07
This line is wonderful: "Help her see your love even if she can’t see mine."
You can feel the anguish and anger in the story. What a sad situation.
This is a very sad situation. Sadly, too many homes have felt this impact.
08/13/07
Oh, how sad, how very sad! What a way to go; so depressing. I know this happens, but I hope this time it is fiction - and I have no answers...but as you ended the story; God has answers.
08/21/07
Saddest story of all. The poor children. I know that only God can intervene in a situation this desperate. Your writing wrung my heart and I too hope this is not a true story.