The Official Writing Challenge
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08/10/07
I like the way you started the story in the middle, went back in time, and then picked the story up at the end where you had started — tied the package up very nicely.
Very vivid! A believable account of the thoughts of a dying man.
You made good use of adjectives in this piece. Well done
08/21/07
Wow, a very powerful entry about this topic! Descriptive writing paints vivid picture for me of the scenes you described.