The Official Writing Challenge
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08/09/07
Love your title--a great oxymoron!

This might be even zippier with dialogue, written more as a story than as a first-person account. Something to consider if you re-visit it.

08/10/07
Good moral here — it's always better to act in love than to react in anger — especially when you don't have all the facts.
08/13/07
This story touched me. Given a second chance. Very well done.
08/16/07
Great message in this piece.
08/21/07
I can relate from the other side of the fence-my Dad's in a nursing home and I can tell you, my number one concern is that his needs are being met! Thanks for giving me some peace that the staff are looking out for that, too.