The Official Writing Challenge
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08/10/07
The Lord took the wheel without his permission, and then with it. Nice progression — I could feel the hunger, the desolation, then the anger and the surrender.
08/11/07
I started not to leave a comment, but I thought better of it.

I've been there.

Thank you for posting.

You know, with all the things that we have been through, it seems like we should all get together and share some time.

Whattaya think?

Pauly
08/12/07
Very well written story...but then what? It's unfinished. This reader needs an ending...(I don't have a good make-believe mind - I need somebody to end it for me.) I somehow feel left out in the open, wondering, pondering, thinking, wishing, hoping- But otherwise Great!
08/21/07
I could feel the frustration and anger in your MC. I was glad he seemed to be finally finding the way to some peace in his life and direction at the end.