The Official Writing Challenge
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08/02/07
Quite enjoyable. I liked it.
08/03/07
Yeah, the sad burgers did the trick. Pretty good work, think about eliminating some speech tags and this will go far. Bring the burgers to the puppy pen.
08/03/07
What a great dialogue between food for the soul and food for the tum-tum! I wouldn't call this exactly "sad", however, I thought it brilliant. A creative "come on" to God's House.
08/07/07
Good story, and good writing! I can't imagine anyone turning down an invitation like this one.:)