The Official Writing Challenge
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05/09/05
An excellent job with rhyme and meter, and not "forcing" a rhyme with awkward wordings. Better still, a poem with both wit and wisdom. Thanks!
05/10/05
You've captured images of what a mother is in poetic form very well.
Beautiful poem! So true! Congratulations!
05/16/05
Delighted to see another poem place in the Editors' Choice awards this week - and what a delightful poem it is. Lovely work Karri and it will be a great addition to the book for the "Mothers" chapter. Now I really think it may be time for you to move on up to Level 3. You're ready for it. Love, Deb

Great job, Karri! Congratulations on your win. The poem is delightful.