The Official Writing Challenge
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05/09/05
I enjoyed the back and forth experiences of the expecting teen and the mom with pregnancy difficulties. I liked the ending.
Just a suggestion: in dialogue, it might help to start new paragraphs when a new speaker begins.
05/10/05
I like the contrasting images [very realistic]and the way you wove them together at the end.
05/13/05
Having known a few girls who gave up their baby this was very realistic. To help with the switching it's a good idea to put *** lines between sections.
05/16/05
Cheryl, congratulations on your 3rd place in the Level 2 Challenge. However, that doesn't tell the whole story. I think you deserve to know that you were 9th overall - which means you were next in line for the Editors' Choice awards. Feel free to move up to Level 3 now - I think you're more than ready for it. With love, Deb (Challenge Coordinator)