The Official Writing Challenge
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I liked your story, especially the ending. :D Good job!
08/03/07
Creative and thought-provoking! I never would have thought of de-evolving, but I'm sure someone in the scientific world has given it serious thought-ha. I like your main "character", and the Solution to the problem!
I know this is a 'sad' entry. But, I found it to be completely delightful! Well done!
08/06/07
This is extremely creative and well written. I kept reading to find out what would happen...and wasn't disappointed!
08/07/07
Very creative indeed! I enjoyed every word. ^_^
08/09/07
Oh! Janice! This is such a delightful approach to a very difficult topic. So much of our sadness comes from not accepting to Whom we belong: the only One we should go to for help. Beautiful writing carried the plot along with perfect timing. A great story for children!