The Official Writing Challenge
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08/03/07
Very creative. I liked this a lot.

The only thing I'd change is the name "Cross-bearers" to something less descriptive. I felt like it was a mystery that I figured out too quickly.

The verses tied in well, and I could see everything unfolding in my head.
This was great, and I felt it did an awesome job of describing how it feels to watch a fellow soldier get wounded in battle (even if it is a Spiritual battle). Great writing!
08/05/07
Interesting take on the topic. Creative.