The Official Writing Challenge
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Great message, and a moving theme. I'd have a liked a little more, and to have got inside her mind more. Keep writing - you've got great stuff to say.
Welcome to the challenge... :-) Beautiful story, I think you did a great job!
I like the closing, it is a nice thought. I love it when someone 'gets it'. (I love it when 'get it'!) Sweet story!
I love the way you told this tragic story by weaving faith and hope into it. Well done!
I like the way you worked the verse into the story. Good job. His was are higher!
This is so beautiful. God's ways sometimes stun us, but usually there is a reason He does such things or allows them to happen. God B;ess.