The Official Writing Challenge
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This is a kind of "brighten your corner" message. Passing the candle person to person is still the best way.
08/02/07
A great testament to the way we can make a difference in someones life through something as simple as genuine interest in them.

Thank you for sharing this.
08/04/07
Inspiring!

Instead of having the woman give a long, uninterrupted speech, it might be more interesting for your readers to see a conversation between her and the narrator...would also help us to get to know the narrator better.

I particularly enjoyed this because it rings true, and thus is very affirming.