The Official Writing Challenge
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What a contrast to all the cute and funny "embarrassed" stories of our last challenge! Well written but so, so sad. At least you left the door open for Saffron and Kyle to have further interaction. The fact that Kyle prayed for guidance gave me hope.
08/02/07
This is very well written. Great job.

I like the way you left the story open ended, leaving the rest to the readers imagination.
loved it doesn't seem like the right response- but I did. great description, good, realistic dialogue. and the plot of the story is good, too. well done!
08/04/07
Beautifully crafted and heartbreaking.
08/05/07
Very moving story. Loved the dialogue, the descriptions and the message. Great writing!