The Official Writing Challenge
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Whew! This really depicts sadness with no relief. You certainly nailed the topic but being the kind who scans each dark cloud for silver I wished for a better outcome. Good writing though!
08/02/07
Although I would have liked to see a happier ending. Your entry fits the topic well, and it is well written. Good Job!
08/03/07
You did a great job discribing pain even beyond sadness. You captured depression, that is beyond "the Blues", and usually requires professional intervention. I do hope your 'journaler' is fictional.
08/04/07
Oh dear, I hope this is fictional. If so, it's very, very good, and perfectly shows the blackness of depression.
08/05/07
As someone who records reflections in a journal, I could relate to this piece. You captured emotions and thoughts in a well-written manner.
My friend's wife died while we were in college.Everyone had "The Answer" Everyone but him.Sometimes a person has to feel what a person has to feel.You tell it well.The story could continue into this week's topic Anger if emotins are left unchecked