The Official Writing Challenge
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07/27/07
Good story! Your characters are well described and the point of your story is clear.
Nice story. I was a little confused with the Hanna and Hannah and the Danielle and Danni. Your writing is strong and your dialogue is especially good. You gave good descriptions. Danni learned a good lesson.
07/31/07
Good dialog! Liked the fact that BOTH learned a lesson. Good stuff.