The Official Writing Challenge
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Poor man! So many troubles and embarrassments! But I like the way you end with a reminder of how much Christ endured to ensure our salvation.
Very good point at the end, we sometimes forget that Christ had the same emotions and disappointments that we have.
You combine an easy conversational tone with excellent vocabulary and grammar usage. You made me smile and you brought me back to earth with Jesus' more glorious moment of shame.
Congratulations, Paul. Your entry has placed 8th in Level 2. Well Done! The Lists for the Top 15 in each Level and the Top 40 overall is available in the Weekly Results and Highest Rankings forum of our Faithwriters Message Boards.
Very, very funny...up until the Lord's Table incident; then I, myself, was embarrassed. (Some things are better left unsaid, if you know what I mean?) Keep up the "L.G." bit, Pauly! I love it and our mutual mentor would be proud!