The Official Writing Challenge
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07/26/07
Wonderful, funny story. We've all been in the pastor's shoes. The contrast of odors was great too. Thank you for a great read.
07/27/07
I'd be mortified. Mortified! But, I'd laugh, too, if I were in the audience.
About as bad a nightmare as I can imagine. Would be worse though, I think, if it happened to a 'sugar and spice, everything nice' female. :)
08/01/07
I loved this story, as we all have wondered what would happen if we had such an embarrassing moment.
08/01/07
This is definitely on topic!

I wonder if it'd be more effective if written in the first person, so that we can really feel his mortification--it'd be more "show" and less "tell" that way.

Funny writing.
08/01/07
What a great story, and lesson. Wonderful descriptions, and the comparison of odors was top notch. Well done.
HAAAAAAAAAAA!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I can sure to relate to this. I love it. How funny and how truthful as we all have been there,lol. Reminds me of my one embarrassing experience for sure in a Smelly Revenge I wrote. Too bad I didn't think of it for this topic as it would have fit it. GRIN. Keep up the writing. You could write humor easily. LOL Great job!
08/02/07
Great description, and SO on topic. I also think this might be a bit stronger written in first person, but this was great regardless.