The Official Writing Challenge
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07/21/07
What a wonderful change in this young boy. I wish you'd been able to focus a bit more on the actual change - how it came about, etc. A bit more detail would make this great piece even more so. This warmed my heart.
What a poignant story, with much heartfelt emotion. A child often has a difficult time understanding the loss of a parent, sibling or friend.
Wonderful point that God heals hearts.
07/22/07
Wonderful story, well told. I wonder if the balance was right for a short essay, a little on the heavy side for most of the essay, but still, this is one to note.
07/25/07
Good story! I really liked the idea that Dustin's dad was a positive role model. Having two daughters myself, it encourages me to continue to instill a christian influence in their lives while I still can. Good job!