The Official Writing Challenge
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07/19/07
A touching story - unusual and well written.
A good article -- and what a good salesman. I'm sure his friendly Christian manner meant a lot to the customers.
I really like your "voice" in this piece. I also like the happiness portrayed in performing a day's work...nothing spectacular, just an underlying happiness. Very nice.
07/24/07
Nice story. The character of 'Vince' was wonderfully portrayed. Well written. Good job!
Gabrielle, congratulation on your "Highly Commended." I enjoyed your entry & its message. Excellent writing.