The Official Writing Challenge
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07/20/07
Well written story and devotional tucked together! I had to get my Bible out and look up your reference verse because I hadn't noticed that bit about "their wealth will not DESCEND with them" before. Doesn't sound like a good direction to be going, does it?! Good writing!
You wove a great life lesson into your story. Well done!
07/24/07
This is written so well. Your story flows great with wonderful descriptions. Well done!
07/25/07
Nice! I like how the story progresses here. We go from watching into a thoughtful mode. I think I found a typo here:
Surly, these were prosperous people.
Is there and "E" missing? Otherwise, good job here! ^_^
07/26/07
Great description, and GREATER scripture tie-in! Glad I finally found this :)