The Official Writing Challenge
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07/21/07
Lovely reflection - this was wistful and thoughtful and full of hope. Enjoyed it very much.
I enjoyed your descriptions of the snow. The information about Ephraim was interesting and well-told, as well. I wonder if you could return to the snow at the end, or draw some analogies between the winter season and the season of Ephraim's life. Just a thought.
07/24/07
Nice descriptions here. I liked the way you incorporated both scripture and hymns into your story. Good job!
07/25/07
Good descriptions of your main character. I enjoyed reading your account of his devout life.