The Official Writing Challenge
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07/19/07
Loved the comparison to a soft marshmallow. The whole story was well written and captured the essence of the little girl perfectly.
07/20/07
Just the way a little girl sounds and laughs! I could imagine her very well. Great descriptions in your story!
07/24/07
This is a well written story. Great dialog and descriptions. Good job!
07/24/07
Cute story — you got into Gail's head so well.
07/25/07
I really enjoyed this story. You added bits of detail making your characters come alive! I liked the sentence where the truck rattled her chest - vivid!
07/25/07
A precious little story and an interesting dialogue.