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07/19/07
Nice Poem. Short, but sweet. It helps remind me that no worldly possessions or worldly deeds can compete with the true happiness that my Savior gives me each day. Good Job! I enjoyed this!
This would make an excellent devotional...wonderful message.
I agree this would make a wonderful devotional. You have expressed biblical truths which many of us forget or pay little heed to until like you we see only God provides the answer to our happiness.
Well expressed sentiments in your poem. Happiness cannot be bought or achieved without faith. Good work!
07/24/07
So true! We run ourselves ragged trying to please everyone but the Lord. It's wise to remember that when we [lease Him first, the other things fall into line.

Thanks for sharing your poem!