The Official Writing Challenge
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Everything you say is true and yet I feel these issues are but the externals set in motion by what is happening to us on the inside. We need to fall on our knees as Moses did to ask for mercy and change for hearts that have become hard and cold.
Great opening line - good examples - good style of writing. You wrote this well with a ending filled with hope - good message. Part of me wished though you would have expanded the good news part a bit more as you have many paragraphs of the coming threats and only one for us to draw hope from.
When I read articles like this they have the power to make "my heart melt within me"...then you remind me where to place my confidence. Thank you.