The Official Writing Challenge
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07/12/07
I love that Hebrew word that likens a male baby's cry to a lion's roar. :0) Well done treatment of an old beloved Bible story. It's hard to imagine how confident in the Lord a woman would have to be to put her child in a basket and launch him into the water.That is LOVE and FAITH in every direction.
07/12/07
Excellent detail! I found Miriam's speech a bit "old", but that could just be me. A wonderfully told tale! I was engrossed.
07/14/07
I enjoyed reading this, too! And I've always been amazed at how God was able to reward her faith with her own child back in her arms! Good choice of story for the topic and written very well.
07/15/07
This is incredible! The language usage makes it feel so authentic to the times. Great work.
A beautiful retelling of the story. Congratulations on placing.
07/19/07
Very well written, great job! Congratz on the highly commended.